Heads up, the first two links (in "-- The Open-Source Wish Project, Wish For Immortality 1.1") both link to scam/spam websites now
"In particularly, I've noticed people get confused when..."
should say 'particularly' or 'in particular'
"Early studiers of cults were surprised to discover than when cults receive a major shock"
Should say "...to discover that when cults..."