It sounds like an excellent foundation.
Ideas for improvement:
Criticism:
Mostly confused about how the chronophone works. However I try to imagine strict rules, the thought experiment is not that interesting.
I felt like I had a pretty good grasp on what was happening, but in the end I'm just as confused as at the beginning... '^-^
it is maximally difficult for your to untangle rules
-> it is maximally difficult for you to untangle rules
Luna's mother would never sell her daughter in exchange information she could deduce for herself.
-> Luna's mother would never sell her daughter in exchange for information she could deduce for herself.
Heh, it's better to have this than nothing at all! I'll keep hoping for it. ^-^