Unclear focus. I had a hard time figuring out what your primary point was, and evaluating it for cohesion and reasonableness. (This isn't necessarily claiming it was/wasn't reasonable, just that I found it hard enough to follow that I couldn't review it easily). For new users, we request content that sticks to one particular point/focus-area. "Theory of everything" or broad reaching worldview posts tend to be hard distinguish from "somewhat manic / crack-pot-y" posts. We suggest new users focus on making one succinct point for their first post.
LessWrong has a particularly high bar for content from new users and this contribution doesn't quite meet the bar. (We have a somewhat higher bar for approving a user's first post or comment than we expect of subsequent contributions.)

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