The story seems to be unfolding pretty much the same, no matter the AI personality.
The human is a bit far away, a bit abstract, which leads to low emotional involvement. Maybe the human could have a name and a distinct personality that's generated? Or you could prompt the user for their name and the AI will refer to the human by that name.
In a similar vain: Somehow the AI seems to be a bit of an unreliable narrator. It will talk about restricting the freedom of the human to increase their safety, but it will frame it in... (read more)
Love the idea! Some things I noticed:
The story seems to be unfolding pretty much the same, no matter the AI personality.
The human is a bit far away, a bit abstract, which leads to low emotional involvement. Maybe the human could have a name and a distinct personality that's generated? Or you could prompt the user for their name and the AI will refer to the human by that name.
In a similar vain: Somehow the AI seems to be a bit of an unreliable narrator. It will talk about restricting the freedom of the human to increase their safety, but it will frame it in... (read more)