3. I can probably get my sister or my spouse to read my drafts, but it might take up to 24 hours to get to posting that way. If I want to implement this habit during my DIY Inkhaven, I should write two today, post one, and get the other read by the human reviewer. From then on, I'll stay one post ahead. So if someone wants to implement this habit, and they're posting daily, they should implement it along with #15.
I think this parenthetical statement should maybe be a footnote or something, because it makes the and part of the sentence too far away from the both part. Or maybe put it in the following sentence? I got a little lost.
3. I can probably get my sister or my spouse to read my drafts, but it might take up to 24 hours to get to posting that way. If I want to implement this habit during my DIY Inkhaven, I should write two today, post one, and get the other read by the human reviewer. From then on, I'll stay one post ahead. So if someone wants to implement this habit, and they're posting daily, they should implement it along with #15.