You might want to shorten your sentences by using less of filler sentences and phrases which makes your article confusing and longer than it needs to be. Since this is a technical article and not a fictional story, it would be good if you can bring across your points in a clear and concise manner.
You might want to shorten your sentences by using less of filler sentences and phrases which makes your article confusing and longer than it needs to be. Since this is a technical article and not a fictional story, it would be good if you can bring across your points in a clear and concise manner.