That's fascinating, as someone new to the landscape. I found the sequence particularly thick, each sentence heavy when I read it the first time, right off the bat. Months later, it's much easier on the eyes. Do you think it could use any further help in getting it out? (Also, do you have any examples of other good existing distillations as well, out of curiosity?)
That's fascinating, as someone new to the landscape. I found the sequence particularly thick, each sentence heavy when I read it the first time, right off the bat. Months later, it's much easier on the eyes. Do you think it could use any further help in getting it out? (Also, do you have any examples of other good existing distillations as well, out of curiosity?)