I think this isn't getting readers because the explanation of AI use is at the bottom not the top. I think people tend to skip AI written posts by default.
Also that explanation was not satisfying. What does 10-70% written by Claude mean? You've got to be able to describe the process more precisely than that. And I think readers care.
I suggest you move it to the top and clarify. I think the work you've done makes it worth reading.
I've only skimmed the content so far, but this looks like a real contribution to the literature. I did a little lit review on psychopathy recently and the field was a mess, as you describe.
I think this isn't getting readers because the explanation of AI use is at the bottom not the top. I think people tend to skip AI written posts by default.
I saw the disclaimer at the top and it caused me to not engage at all, so I'm not sure what your model is here.
As an exercise inspired by your comment, I went ahead and tried engaging with it anyway. After the first 600 words it pinged my internal AI sense, at which point I did my normal thing of strong downvoting and skipping the post. I checked afterwards and Pangram reports those words as 100% AI-generated.
I don't think the disclaimer is the issue.
It's all in an AI block. The new rules require it. You can't try to pass it off without announcing.
This is in the recent The new Editor post. They run pamgram on every post except the blocks marked ai, because they're labeled.
I hope you'll use that downvote in a more measured way, now that people can't pass off AI work as their own. AI generated text isn't the problem; AI generated ideas are. There can be a lot of merit in work where an AI did a bunch of the writing IMO.
My issue with AI-generated work has always been the text, not the attribution. I have read a decent amount of current-gen outputs, including works that self-describe as partly human-written, and it has left me feeling confident that such works will almost always earn my downvote on the merits. Presumably some future model release will cause me to reevaluate this approach, but for Q2 2026, I feel it is a perfectly measured policy.
People who get more out of AI writing than I do are of course free to vote differently.
So you can happily downvote because you don't have anyone in your life you has any of these conditions so it's not useful for you personally, but when you downvote it because you don't like something about my writing style, then I wouldn't call it downvoting on its merits but more on linguistic-aesthetic taste.
I downvoted it because I dislike Claude's writing quality, the post is described 10-70% written by Claude, and inspection reveals that it does appear to be heavily written by Claude.
I think most people agree that GPT 3.0 makes for a poor coauthor because the model just isn't smart enough to do the task well. Everyone has their own version number at which they find LLM-coauthored works valuable, mine happens to be higher than Claude 4.6.
Lol, then knock yourself out with this one, because that's virtually all hand-written! (Inb4 it's also unaesthetic, just in a different way. 🙈)
Thanks! <3
Yeah, I didn't keep track of what words were written by who. It's quite plausible that I've touched every single sentenced and wrote almost half of them from scratch, but it's also plausible that I touched maybe 80% of sentences and wrote 20% from scratch. The Choice article is mostly hand-written because the AI didn't have a lot of ideas, but this one is more mixed. It's hard for me to reconstruct at this point. In the future I can try to commit all changes to Git with correct attribution and then share the whole edit history for transparency. (But really, when two people coauthor an article, it's also often not clear who wrote which sentences, contributed which ideas, did which edits during the proofreading, etc.)
I'll move the collapsible box to the top if it lets me! (The editor gets a bit weird when I use these blocks.)
I'd reference this comment. It gives a lot more information than 10-70% which sounds very strange and like you're maybe hiding something.
Of course it's the provenance of the claims more than the words that matters. I'm guessing you came up with the claims largely independent of Claude and I'd say that too even though it's even harder to track that.
I don't think you need to track every edit to explain to people roughly how the process went.
Thanks, I can expand my LLM note a bit more! I just remembered that I have a backup of my full conversation (up to the point where I took the backup, but almost all of it) with Claude, including the first drafts.
Having thought and read about psychopathy for so long, I felt very confused about how to structure my mental model, so my input to Claude were countless fairly unorganized thoughts about models, contradictions, advantages and disadvantages of framings, etc., and Claude's first big contribution was to suggest this tag structure where tags (made up of a letter and a descriptor) get combined to form a personality profile. That was a format that hadn't occurred to me and that I loved for its power and flexibility. But then it was me again who fleshed out that model – introduced the layers of genetics, neurology, psychodynamics, behavior, etc.
For people with psychopathic or narcissistic traits. I’m not here to moralize or to tell you you’re broken. I think that factory farming is an abomination akin to slavery but at a massively greater scale and that the cuts to USAID are crimes against humanity worse than many wars. Most people are oblivious to that or contribute to it. The median serial killer vanishes in the statistical noise among the horrors of this world. Many of my psychopathic friends are actually doing better than average despite their traits, or perhaps precisely thanks to what they had to learn to make these traits work for them. If they donate $100 to an ACE top charity, they’re suddenly among the crème de la crème of the least harmful humans alive.
So if that fucked-up ne’er-do-well that’s the median person deserves my honesty and respect, so do you.
Amazing passage; don't actually know any details about Psychopathy-empirics but in general still couldn't agree more.
Why we need a new framework for understanding psychopathy, narcissism, and related presentations.
This is the first article in a series on understanding psychopathy and related presentations. The series is written for three audiences: people with psychopathic or narcissistic traits who want to understand themselves better, clinicians and researchers who want a more integrated framework, and curious laypeople who want to move beyond stereotypes.
Introduction
I’ve spent about a year trying to understand psychopathy – not just from textbooks, but from friendships. Some of my friends score high on the Psychopathy Checklist Revised (PCL-R), and through countless conversations, I’ve come to see that “psychopathy” is not one thing but many things hiding under a single label.
This creates problems. When researchers study “psychopathy,” they may be studying completely different populations. When clinicians treat “psychopathy,” they may be applying the same approach to people who need very different interventions. And when people try to understand themselves, they may find that the label fits in some ways but not others – leaving them more confused than before.
This series proposes a new framework: A multi-level taxonomy that distinguishes what you were born with, what your brain looks like now, what happened to you developmentally, what psychological structures you developed, how you behave, and how you understand your own agency. These are different lenses on the same phenomenon – and using all of them gives us a much richer picture than any single lens alone.
The Naming Problem
The word “psychopathy” is used to describe at least four different things:
1. Genetic loading. Researchers talk about genes associated with psychopathy – variants of MAOA, the serotonin transporter gene (5-HTTLPR), oxytocin receptor genes (OXTR), and others. When they say someone is “genetically psychopathic,” they mean the person carries variants that increase risk for psychopathic traits. (For reviews of candidate genes, see Gunter et al., 2010, Viding & McCrory, 2012, De Brito et al., 2021, and Frazier et al., 2019.)
2. Brain patterns. Neuroscientists describe psychopathy in terms of brain structure and function – a smaller or less reactive amygdala, reduced activity in the insula, altered connectivity between prefrontal and limbic regions. When they say someone is “neurologically psychopathic,” they mean the person’s brain shows these patterns. (See Fallon, 2013, Tyler et al., 2019, Frazier et al., 2019, for comprehensive reviews.)
3. Psychological structure. Psychodynamic clinicians describe psychopathy in terms of self-structure and relational patterns – an absent or fragmented sense of self, instrumental orientation toward others, absence of guilt or remorse, preoccupation with power or control. When they say someone is “psychodynamically psychopathic,” they mean the person has these internal structures. (See McWilliams, 2011, for a summary chapter and literature recommendations.)
4. Behavior. The PCL-R and similar instruments measure psychopathy through observable behaviors and self-reported traits – manipulation, callousness, impulsivity, criminal versatility. When they say someone is “behaviorally psychopathic,” they mean the person shows these patterns. (The PCL-R is described in Hare, 2008.)
Here’s the problem: These four things don’t always go together.
Someone can have genetic loading for psychopathy but, raised in a supportive environment, never develop the brain patterns or behavioral expression. Someone can develop psychopathic brain patterns through chronic trauma and dissociation, without any particular genetic predisposition. Someone can score high on the PCL-R through learned behavior, while having relatively intact empathic capacity that they’ve learned to suppress. And someone can have all the neurological and psychological features of psychopathy while never engaging in criminal behavior.
Using one word for all of these creates confusion. It leads researchers to treat heterogeneous groups as homogeneous. It leads clinicians to apply one-size-fits-all treatments. And it leads individuals to misunderstand themselves – either over-identifying with a label that only partially fits, or rejecting a label that captures something important about their experience.
The Heterogeneity Problem
Even within each level of description, there are important subtypes.
At the Genetic Level
Different genetic variants may produce different phenotypes:
At the Neurological Level
The classic finding is hypoactivity in the amygdala and related structures – reduced fear conditioning, poor threat recognition, blunted emotional response. But there’s also:
At the Psychodynamic Level
The internal world of psychopathy varies enormously:
At the Behavioral Level
The PCL-R distinguishes two factors:
Some individuals are high on Factor 1 but low on Factor 2 – they’re manipulative and callous but not impulsive or reckless. Others show the reverse pattern. Still others are high on both. These are different presentations with different trajectories and different needs.
One of the most useful models in my opinion is the Triarchic Model of Psychopathy (Patrick et al., 2009), which distinguishes three distinct dimensions:
This model is excellent because it acknowledges that “boldness” (fearless dominance) is distinct from “disinhibition” (impulsivity). A person can be bold without being disinhibited (the “successful psychopath”), or disinhibited without being bold (the “reactive” type). My framework builds on this by adding the developmental (E) and psychodynamic (D) layers that explain how these traits emerge and organize into a self.
My score of 29 puts me in the 8th percentile among women (23 on boldness, 4 on meanness, 2 on disinhibition). The overall distribution in the general population varies greatly by gender.
Another study further subdivided these three factors for better predictive results in their sample (highlights mine):
A third model is that of the Psychopathic Personality Inventory (a mock version that gives good results). It distinguishes 8 factors:
They are (with the exception of coldheartedness) sometimes grouped into “fearless dominance” and “self-centered impulsivity.”
The Framework: G-N-E-D-B-A
To address these problems, I propose a multi-level framework with six dimensions:
Each individual can be described as a profile across all six dimensions. Two people who both “have psychopathy” might have completely different profiles – and understanding those differences matters for prediction, treatment, and self-understanding.
The Ordering Is (Roughly) Causal
The dimensions are ordered from most distal to most proximal:
This ordering helps us see that the same behavioral presentation (B) can arise from different developmental pathways (E) and different psychological structures (D), including different communicative failures (C), which in turn can arise from different neurological patterns (N) and genetic loadings (G). And all of this is filtered through how the person understands themselves (A).
Profiles, Not Labels
Instead of asking “Is this person a psychopath?” we can ask: “What is this person’s profile?”
For example:
These two individuals might be called “psychopathic” by different psychologists but they are fundamentally different. Understanding the difference matters for predicting their trajectories and for any treatments they may or may not attempt.
What This Series Will Cover
This series will develop the framework in detail:
Article 2: The Substrate. Genetics and neuroscience – what we know about the biological foundations of psychopathy, and how to think about primary versus secondary presentations.
Article 3: The Shaping. Environment and development – how different types of adversity lead to different outcomes, and why the same genetic loading can produce a functional person or a criminal depending on context.
Article 4: The Self. Psychodynamic structures – the different ways the psychopathic self can be organized, including the autonomy dimension and the relationship between psychopathy and narcissism (what I’ve called sovereignism).
Article 5: The Mechanics. How empathy fails – a detailed breakdown of the different ways empathy can break down, from perceptual failures to simulation failures to affective inversion. (This connects to my earlier work on the sadism spectrum.)
Article 6: The Types. Archetypal clusters – common profiles that tend to co-occur, with recognizable presentations that readers may identify with.
Article 7: The Choice. Recovery, if you want it – an honest assessment of what recovery means for different presentations and the trade-offs involved.
A Note on Tone
This series is written for three audiences, and the tone reflects that.
For people with psychopathic or narcissistic traits. I’m not here to moralize or to tell you you’re broken. I think that factory farming is an abomination akin to slavery but at a massively greater scale and that the cuts to USAID are crimes against humanity worse than many wars. Most people are oblivious to that or contribute to it. The median serial killer vanishes in the statistical noise among the horrors of this world. Many of my psychopathic friends are actually doing better than average despite their traits, or perhaps precisely thanks to what they had to learn to make these traits work for them. If they donate $100 to an ACE top charity, they’re suddenly among the crème de la crème of the least harmful humans alive.
So if that fucked-up ne’er-do-well that’s the median person deserves my honesty and respect, so do you. I’ll describe things as they are, including trade-offs that others might not acknowledge. Empathy is fun but also painful and often detrimental to moral decision-making. Regulation is stabilizing but also boring. Attachment creates meaning but also vulnerability. These are real trade-offs, and I’ll respect your intelligence enough to present them honestly.
For clinicians and researchers. I’ve tried to integrate findings from neuroscience, genetics, attachment theory, and psychodynamic thinking into a coherent framework. I’ll provide references throughout and a technical glossary. The clusters I propose are hypotheses, not established facts – but they may help organize thinking about a heterogeneous population.
For curious laypeople. I’ll explain technical concepts as I go and provide examples (real and fictional) to make abstract ideas concrete. You don’t need a psychology background to follow this series.
One thing I won’t do is pretend that all presentations are equally concerning or that change is always desirable. Some people with psychopathic traits live excellent lives and contribute enormously to society. Others feel isolated, desolate, hopeless, or cause significant harm. The framework I’m proposing is descriptive, not prescriptive – it’s about understanding, not judging.
Glossary: Key Terms for This Series
This glossary introduces terms used throughout the series. Full definitions are provided in the relevant articles.
Dimensional Levels
Key G-Level Concepts
Key N-Level Concepts
Key E-Level Concepts
Key D-Level Concepts
Key B-Level Concepts
Key A-Level Concepts
Key C-Level Concepts
Key Distinctions
Next: The Substrate
The next article explores the biological foundations of psychopathy – what genetics and neuroscience tell us about the origins of these presentations, and how to think about the critical distinction between primary and secondary forms.
Note on LLM use
This sequence is based on hundreds of hours of literature research and hundreds of hours of chats with friends with these neurodivergences and/or personality disorders, which I compiled into suitable case study composites. To my knowledge, many of the insights in it are original and valuable for insight and treatment.
The final posts I would estimate are written to 10–70% or so by Claude, and the ideas are a collaborative effort too. After my year of research and befriending and sense-making, I discussed my models and ideas with Claude, and let Claude assist me in structuring my thoughts in a more digestible way, iron out some of my mistakes, and write it all up. I carefully edited the resulting posts, which led to more or less substantial modifications.
Timeline: