Am I wrong to assume this is mostly AI-written? Please mention this at the top either way, this strongly reads as AI to me.
Also side note, Carthage wasn't even salted, that's a modern myth. (it was utterly destroyed nonetheless)
"Premature optimisation is the root of all evil." -- Don Knuth.
Let us suppose that free will exists. So the universe is not deterministic. So those who built the current magical infrastructure could not know that their choices are optimal -- they could only hope. So we may ask: is it not possible that we might improve upon their work?
[Edit] Perhaps more to the point, if everything is so well optimised, why there are simultaneously (a) "many bright students" and (b) many ways for them to tragically destroy themselves and their loved ones? Well, I suppose that this is a very old question. Namely, why is there a tree of knowledge with a big sign on it saying "do not eat"?
So we may ask: is it not possible that we might improve upon their work?
This is true. The response is: What probability of success do you need to reach before this becomes the wise course of action, given the consequences of failure?
The wizarding world is a post scarcity society already.
What probability of success do you need to reach ... given the consequences of failure?
How can we estimate such things, if the scientific method is forbidden to us?
Your Marcus Valerius Corvus used the scientific method:
The work was methodical. The safeguards were extensive.
And you erased him. What lesson were we supposed to hear?
Sometimes your best isn't good enough and you should take this into account when you do risk assessments, especially when someone more experienced tells you not to do something. The universe is under no obligation to reward you for being persistent.
On a more object level, there is no lesson: This guy did the equivalent of trying to hack an AGI. You don't get to complain when that backfires.
This is really good. It's a fine addition to the HPMOR project, questioning its premises in good rationalist style.
It also probably wouldn't exist without Claude's help.
For fiction like this, and perhaps that covers a lot of fiction, it seems clear to me that using AI has a lot of advantages. I am very happy to read human ideas written by AI.
Thank you! You are right, it wouldn't exist without Claude. I have written and published books before (1000+ pages and counting) but writing is a lot of work and I wouldn't normally do it without a very good reason. But Claude has made the barrier disappear. It is now so much easier than before to turn thoughts into coherent stories. I no longer need to spend hours on it.
A Harry Potter fanfiction. Based on the world of "Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality" by Eliezer Yudkowsky, diverging from canon.
This story was written collaboratively with Claude: Starting from the premise "HPMOR but with Chesterton's Fence", I brainstormed ideas with it and decided what to include and what to discard. Claude wrote down the result once I was satisfied with the plan, and I made final edits.
Harry had been having, by any objective measure, an excellent week.
On Monday he had demonstrated, to his own satisfaction and Professor Flitwick's visible alarm, that the Hover Charm could be generalized to any object regardless of mass if you conceptualized it as a momentum transfer rather than a force application. On Wednesday he had worked out why Neville's potions kept failing — the textbook instructions assumed clockwise stirring, but the underlying reaction was chirally sensitive, and Neville was left-handed. A trivial fix. Neville had cried.
On Friday evening, buoyed by the week's successes and looking for a specific reference on crystalline wand cores that he was certain would unlock a further generalization of his momentum framework, Harry was in the Restricted Section.
He had access. Professor McGonagall had granted it after the Hover Charm incident, in a tone that suggested she was choosing between supervised access and finding him there anyway at 2 AM. A reasonable calculation on her part.
The book he wanted wasn't where the index said it should be. In its place was something else — a slim volume, untitled, bound in leather that had gone dark and soft with age. No author. No date. No library markings at all, which was itself unusual; Madam Pince catalogued everything.
He opened it because he was Harry Potter and there was an uncatalogued book in front of him and not opening it was not a thing that was going to happen.
The first entry was dated in a system he didn't immediately recognize — then did. The Roman calendar. Before the Julian reform. Which put it somewhere around...
He did the arithmetic twice. The book was over two thousand years old.
The handwriting — once he adjusted to the Latin, which was oddly easy to read, closer to spell notation than classical prose — was precise, methodical, and deeply familiar. Not the content. The voice.
Harry's breath caught. Not at the content — at the recognition. He had written almost exactly this, in his own notes, three months ago. About Transfiguration and Charms.
He kept reading.
The entries spanned what appeared to be several years. Harry read them in order, sitting cross-legged on the cold floor of the Restricted Section, the book in his lap, a Lumos hovering above him that he had long since stopped consciously maintaining.
The author — he never gave his name in the early entries, a habit of Roman-era wizards who considered written names a vulnerability — progressed rapidly. His early observations were sharp. His experiments were well-designed. Harry found himself nodding along, mentally annotating, sometimes wanting to reach through two millennia and suggest a control group.
By the middle entries, the author had begun to find things that disturbed him.
Harry lowered the book for a moment. His hands were not shaking, because he was Harry Potter and his hands did not shake, but he noticed that his Lumos had brightened considerably, which was the sort of involuntary response that meant his emotional state was affecting his magic, which meant his emotional state was more affected than he was admitting to himself.
The etymology goes the wrong way.
He'd never thought about it. He'd never thought about it. He'd been casting spells in what he assumed was Latin for months and he'd never once asked why a language from an Italian peninsula was the universal interface for a fundamental force of nature.
He kept reading.
The author's investigation led him, inevitably, to the founders. Not of Hogwarts — of Rome.
Harry heard himself laugh — a short, involuntary sound in the silent library. Of course the author wouldn't stop. Harry wouldn't have stopped either. That was the whole point of being the kind of person who —
He stopped laughing.
He kept reading.
The next three entries were short and shaken. The author's handwriting, previously meticulous, had become uneven. He did not reproduce what the Elder told him. He referred to it only obliquely.
The entries resumed some weeks later. The author had regained his composure and — Harry felt a chill as he recognized this too — had begun to rationalize.
Harry was nodding. The argument was sound. The distinction between studying and dismantling was real and important. You could investigate a system without —
He turned the page.
The entry ended there. The next one was dated six days later.
The tone of the entries shifted after Carthage. The author became more cautious. More reflective. He wrote about his family — a wife, two children. He wrote about his garden. There were gaps of weeks between entries, then months.
Harry thought the journal was winding toward a conclusion. A decision to stop. A graceful retreat into domestic life, wisdom earned, lesson learned.
That is not what happened.
The entries after that were technical. Dense. Excited. The author had found collaborators — "careful men, scholars, not reckless" — and they were mapping the ward structure in detail. The work was methodical. The safeguards were extensive. Every entry described another layer of caution, another fallback, another reason this was different from what had come before.
Harry read faster. Then slower.
The last entry was not dramatic. It was not a cry for help or a confession or a warning. It was a plan for the following week's work. A list of measurements to take. A note to bring lunch because last time they had worked through the meal and concentration suffered. A reminder to pick up something from the market for his daughter's birthday.
Then blank pages.
Harry turned them. One after another. Blank. Blank. Blank.
He turned them all.
The author's name was not in the journal. But there were enough identifying details — the Third House, the Elder, the specific ward locations — that it took Harry less than twenty minutes in the historical records to find him.
Marcus Valerius Corvus. Wizard of the Third Augural House. Born in the 154th year of Rome's founding. Noted scholar. Family man. Described in one secondary source as "the most gifted theoretical magician of his generation."
The secondary sources were sparse after a certain date. There was a gap in the records of the Third House. A fire, attributed to accident. Several members of the House dead or missing. A brief, clinical notation in a Senate record about "disturbances in the southern district" that required intervention. The word used for the intervention was one Harry had to look up.
It meant, roughly, "cauterization."
A later genealogical record listed the surviving members of the Corvus family. His wife. His daughter. His son. They had relocated to a rural settlement far from Rome. There was a single annotation next to his wife's name that Harry read three times before he understood it. It was a legal status marker.
It meant that her husband was not dead but had been declared non-person. Stripped of name, of citizenship, of family ties. Not executed. Not exiled. Something the Romans reserved for people who had committed offenses so severe that the punishment was un-being. Removal from all records, all lineages, all memory.
The man who had written the journal with such clarity and care and cautious optimism had his name scraped from the walls of his own house.
And the southern district of magical Rome — Harry checked — had been rebuilt. But the secondary sources noted, in the careful phrasing of historians who did not want to speculate, that the character of the magic there was different afterward. Weaker in some ways. Stranger in others. As if the substrate itself had been bruised.
Harry closed the genealogical record. He sat for a while in the silent library. His Lumos had dimmed to almost nothing and he had not noticed.
He thought about Marcus Valerius Corvus, who was the most gifted theoretical magician of his generation, who took every precaution, who only wanted to know, who was not going to use what he found, who was merely going to remove one ward —
He thought about Carthage. Five hundred thousand people. A salted plain.
He thought about the etymology going the wrong way, and what that meant, and what had built the system that everyone was living inside, and where they had gone.
He thought about the Weasleys' kitchen. The self-stirring pot. The clock on the wall that tracked the family. The pile of shoes by the door. The way Mrs. Weasley's cooking expanded to accommodate however many people showed up, not through efficiency but through abundance, and how the house itself seemed to grow rooms when rooms were needed, and how none of this struck any wizard as remarkable because it wasn't remarkable, it was just life when you had magic, and how he had looked at all of this and thought they could be so much more without ever asking more what? And why?
He thought about a civilization so advanced it could rewrite the laws of physics, and how they were gone so completely that the only evidence was everything.
His Lumos went out. He sat in the dark for a long time.
Then he picked up the journal and went to see the Headmaster.
It was late. Harry had expected to have to argue his way past the gargoyle, but it stepped aside before he spoke. The staircase was already moving. The door at the top was open, and the office was lit, and there was a teapot on the desk that was still steaming.
Dumbledore was in his chair. He looked at the book in Harry's hands and his expression did something complicated that ended in a kind of tired gentleness.
"Sit down, Harry."
Harry sat. Dumbledore poured tea. The cup was warm in Harry's hands and he held it without drinking.
"You knew I'd find it," Harry said.
"I knew you would find it, or something like it. You are not the first student of your particular... temperament."
"The book. Marcus Valerius Corvus. The southern district. All of it. You just — left it there? In the library?"
"Where would you suggest I put it?" Dumbledore said, gently. "It has been in that library for a very long time. It has been found before. It will be found again. The question has never been whether bright students will find it. The question is what they do after."
Harry looked down at his tea.
"Harry, do you know how many people lived in Carthage?"
"At its height? Estimates vary. Somewhere around five hundred thousand."
Dumbledore said nothing. He let the number sit in the room.
A long silence.
"You are not the worst case I have dealt with, if that offers any comfort," Dumbledore said, in the tone of a man offering what comfort he could. "In 1971 I had to physically restrain a student who had found a reference to something called — and I wish I were not saying these words — the Torment Nexus, and was attempting to access it because, and I quote, 'it probably isn't really that bad, the name is most likely metaphorical.'"
A beat.
"It was not metaphorical."
Harry, numbly: "Was that Voldemort?"
"It was not Voldemort. There are many bright students, Harry."
Another silence. The fire crackled. Somewhere in the castle, a clock chimed a late hour.
"Grindelwald read that journal in his fifth year," Dumbledore said, quietly. "He drew ambitious conclusions. I read it the year after. I had the advantage of watching what those conclusions did to my closest friend."
He set down his teacup.
"I was as clever as you, once. Cleverer, perhaps. I looked at the wizarding world and I saw everything you see — the inefficiency, the waste, the tradition without reason, the power unused. Gellert and I were going to remake everything. For the greater good." The words came out with the particular care of a man handling something that still cut. "It was Gellert who wanted to move fast. I was the one who wanted to be systematic. I was going to be careful. I was only going to remove the unnecessary constraints. I had safeguards planned. Precautions. I was not going to be reckless."
He looked at Harry.
"Do you know what the difference is between Gellert Grindelwald and Marcus Valerius Corvus?"
Harry shook his head.
"Scale. Only scale. The reasoning is always the same. 'I am not going to use it, I only want to know. I will take every precaution. This is different from what came before.' I have heard it from every brilliant student who has sat where you are sitting. The words barely vary."
Harry stared at the journal in his lap. The leather was warm where his hands had been holding it.
"What do I do?" he asked. His voice was smaller than he wanted it to be.
"I have found," Dumbledore said, "that the question is less about what to do than about what to want. The wanting is where it all goes wrong. Not the knowing. Not the doing. The wanting."
He picked up the teapot and refilled Harry's cup, though Harry had not drunk any.
"Molly Weasley tells me she is making two pies for the Christmas holiday. Apparently your friend Ron found the first insufficient last year and has formally requested a second. I understand it will be treacle."
Harry looked up. Dumbledore's eyes were bright and kind and ancient and sad all at once.
"Go to the Weasleys for Christmas, Harry. Eat pie. Let Molly fuss over you. Watch Arthur get excited about batteries. These are not small things. In a world that has already been optimized, they are the only things that matter."
Harry walked back to the Gryffindor common room slowly. The castle was quiet. His footsteps echoed in the empty corridors and he listened to them the way you listen to something when your mind is too full for thought.
He thought about Marcus Valerius Corvus, who took every precaution and only wanted to know.
He thought about Grindelwald, who drew ambitious conclusions.
He thought about a brilliant student in 1971 who tried to open something called the Torment Nexus because the name was probably metaphorical.
He thought about the Weasley kitchen, and the self-repairing house, and the clock that tracked the family, and the way Ron talked about his mum's cooking with the unselfconscious happiness of a person who had never once doubted that there would be enough.
He thought about a civilization that could rewrite physics. Gone. Infrastructure still running. No one left to read the manual.
He thought about Dumbledore, seventeen years old, clever as anyone who ever lived, choosing between more and enough, and choosing wrong, and spending the rest of his life gently steering other clever children away from the same door.
He thought about the journal, which he was still carrying, and which he was going to return to the Restricted Section in the morning. Not because it should be hidden. Because it should be findable. Because someday another student with his particular temperament would need to read it at exactly the right moment, and the library needed to be ready.
He climbed through the portrait hole. The common room was empty except for a low fire. Ron had fallen asleep on the couch with a Chudley Cannons scarf over his face. He was snoring.
Harry stood there for a while.
The optimization engine in his head — the one that never stopped, the one that saw every system as a problem and every problem as solvable and every solution as a step toward the next solution — was still running. It would probably always be running. He didn't think you could turn it off. But for the first time since he'd come to Hogwarts, it was reaching a conclusion he hadn't expected.
The system was already optimized. Not by him. Not for him. By someone so far beyond him that the comparison wasn't even meaningful, and then by centuries of people who'd learned, through suffering, which parts to leave alone. The Weasleys' kitchen was the output. The pies were the output. Ron, asleep on the couch, content in a way Harry had never been — Ron was the output.
The fire crackled. Ron shifted in his sleep and murmured something about Quidditch.
Harry put the journal on the table. He sat down in the chair across from his friend. He didn't pick up a book. He didn't start planning. He didn't optimize anything.
He just sat there, in the warmth, and let it be enough.