[Request] Feedback on my Writing

by atucker 1 min read30th Oct 20119 comments

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I've written some posts.

I'd like to get better at writing posts.

I still have some more material for posts.

I'd like to write it well.

 

So, would people be willing to critique my work so far?

Particularly helpful-awesome would be pointing out things I did well somewhere that I didn't do well somewhere else. Also nice would be pointing out what I did badly and well.

Crocker's Rules apply.

 

Miscellaneous:

http://lesswrong.com/lw/7ix/story_rejection/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/80t/thinking_in_bayes_light/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/64t/foma_beliefs_that_cause_themselves_to_be_true/

Consciousness:

http://lesswrong.com/lw/7pm/blindsight_and_consciousness/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/7yr/neural_correlates_of_conscious_access/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/81w/the_protagonist_problem/

Just do it:

http://lesswrong.com/lw/53e/just_try_it_quantity_trumps_quality/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/4up/dont_fear_failure/

http://lesswrong.com/lw/4ln/go_try_things/