You want a story about a lumbering, towering, sweaty, intimidating, bulky, no nonsense investigator grappling with eco-terrorists, a conspiracy, and also raising and protecting her family?

Try "Hummingbird Salamander" by Jeff Vandermeer!

The "Expert Fallacy" (sometimes known as "Argument from Authority") is when an expert goes outside of their domain of expertise to opine on a topic.

Common examples:

• Movie stars (who are good at acting) getting involved in politics.
• Scientists that are experts in one domain commenting on an entirely different field.
  • Happens commonly on podcasts...

"To Explain the World" is a great book by Steven Weinberg. Every page goes down smooth, even the technical notes. Part of what makes it work is Weinberg's clear prose, granting an unobscured view into a mind well the equal of its words. Nothing is made obscure or complex, including technical ideas. It also helps that Weinberg has an appendeix of technical notes to illustrate what's going on, with plentiful figures. Another part is the multi-layered narrative. At a small scale, ideas are placed in the context of the lives of scientists, for whom Weinberg gives a mini-biographies. At a large scale, we progress through time from Ancient Greece, Hellenistic Greece, the Islamic Caliphates, the Renaissance and England on the eve of the Industrial Revolution. Finally, there's Weinberg's dry wit, which had me laughing throughout the book.

From a reader's perspective, this post did not capture my attention. The first sentence does not explain what the book was about. Nor did the second sentence, nor the third...etc. It's not until the seventh sentence with "At a large scale" am I able to intuit that this book is about world history. Before then, I was just reading your opinions on a subject matter that was not made clear to me. 

The first sentence of a blog post is the most important one---it should induce someone to read the next sentence. Your first sentence is that there exists a great book. Okay? There are a lot of great books, but you didn't explain why I should care about this one. I didn't read the rest of your post for this reason.

I've been enjoying many of your posts this month :) But this one lost me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I actually tried talking to my mom about this 6 months ago. As I elaborated further and further on all the reasons A-Z why we're fucked, she saw that it was distressing me. 

She told me, "If it's bothering you, why think about it? You can choose to go think about something else."

"You're basically saying that I should stick my head in the sand like an ostrich and ignore it?"

"Yes. If we're heading towards the end of the world, which I highly doubt, then you should spend the rest of your time doing what makes you happy."

15 minutes later, I finished the story. Jesus. You're getting really good. I was gripped until the very end.

If there was one amazing line that stood out among the rest, it was this:

a now-raw soul rubbing against a world of broken glass.

I told him about the angel on the train, how he was beautiful even as he died.

^When I got to this line in the story, I noticed I was confused. I had already forgotten that you had described the absorbed man as "angelic". I didn't make the connection when you then later mentioned an "angel". I had to Ctrl + F to find a previous mention. Angelic is an adjective describing the man, whereas angel is an entirely new noun (in my head).

Besides that, you also wrote "on the train", but there's no mention of a train previously. 

You're an excellent writer and I've loved reading your fiction. I thought that I would mention, for the sake of feedback, that these two things took me out of the story enough to come write this comment.

Waking up at the same time every day is as important, if not more important, than the quantity slept (up to a point).

For example, if I go to bed 1-2 hours later than usual, I will still choose to wake up at the same time the next day to maintain my normal circadian rhythm. But if I stay up 3+ hours later than usual, then sleeping in makes me feel better.

I'd do some research online to confirm this for yourself, as well :)

I hereby propose that this song by Marc Rebillet be the official anthem of Inkhaven (especially the spoken word part in the middle of the song) :)

The call and [Redacted] response reminds me of author David Foster Wallace's book Brief Interviews with Hideous Men. He puts a blank question, followed by a response from interviewees. Really forces me to pay attention and try to fill in the blank. 

Yours is fun to read, nice job!