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Book Review: To Explain the World
Declan Molony10d40

"To Explain the World" is a great book by Steven Weinberg. Every page goes down smooth, even the technical notes. Part of what makes it work is Weinberg's clear prose, granting an unobscured view into a mind well the equal of its words. Nothing is made obscure or complex, including technical ideas. It also helps that Weinberg has an appendeix of technical notes to illustrate what's going on, with plentiful figures. Another part is the multi-layered narrative. At a small scale, ideas are placed in the context of the lives of scientists, for whom Weinberg gives a mini-biographies. At a large scale, we progress through time from Ancient Greece, Hellenistic Greece, the Islamic Caliphates, the Renaissance and England on the eve of the Industrial Revolution. Finally, there's Weinberg's dry wit, which had me laughing throughout the book.

From a reader's perspective, this post did not capture my attention. The first sentence does not explain what the book was about. Nor did the second sentence, nor the third...etc. It's not until the seventh sentence with "At a large scale" am I able to intuit that this book is about world history. Before then, I was just reading your opinions on a subject matter that was not made clear to me. 

The first sentence of a blog post is the most important one---it should induce someone to read the next sentence. Your first sentence is that there exists a great book. Okay? There are a lot of great books, but you didn't explain why I should care about this one. I didn't read the rest of your post for this reason.

I've been enjoying many of your posts this month :) But this one lost me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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The Mom Test for AI Extinction Scenarios
Declan Molony18d60

I actually tried talking to my mom about this 6 months ago. As I elaborated further and further on all the reasons A-Z why we're fucked, she saw that it was distressing me. 

She told me, "If it's bothering you, why think about it? You can choose to go think about something else."

"You're basically saying that I should stick my head in the sand like an ostrich and ignore it?"

"Yes. If we're heading towards the end of the world, which I highly doubt, then you should spend the rest of your time doing what makes you happy."

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The Origami Men
Declan Molony26d40

15 minutes later, I finished the story. Jesus. You're getting really good. I was gripped until the very end.

If there was one amazing line that stood out among the rest, it was this:

a now-raw soul rubbing against a world of broken glass.

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The Origami Men
Declan Molony26d40

I told him about the angel on the train, how he was beautiful even as he died.

^When I got to this line in the story, I noticed I was confused. I had already forgotten that you had described the absorbed man as "angelic". I didn't make the connection when you then later mentioned an "angel". I had to Ctrl + F to find a previous mention. Angelic is an adjective describing the man, whereas angel is an entirely new noun (in my head).

Besides that, you also wrote "on the train", but there's no mention of a train previously. 

You're an excellent writer and I've loved reading your fiction. I thought that I would mention, for the sake of feedback, that these two things took me out of the story enough to come write this comment.

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What I've Learnt About How to Sleep
Declan Molony26d22

Waking up at the same time every day is as important, if not more important, than the quantity slept (up to a point).

For example, if I go to bed 1-2 hours later than usual, I will still choose to wake up at the same time the next day to maintain my normal circadian rhythm. But if I stay up 3+ hours later than usual, then sleeping in makes me feel better.

I'd do some research online to confirm this for yourself, as well :)

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The Inkhaven Residency
Declan Molony1mo120

I hereby propose that this song by Marc Rebillet be the official anthem of Inkhaven (especially the spoken word part in the middle of the song) :)

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Our Beloved Monsters
Declan Molony1mo131

The call and [Redacted] response reminds me of author David Foster Wallace's book Brief Interviews with Hideous Men. He puts a blank question, followed by a response from interviewees. Really forces me to pay attention and try to fill in the blank. 

Yours is fun to read, nice job!

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A Comprehensive Guide to Running
Declan Molony1mo20

No you shouldn't be concerned. What you're doing is a form of HIIT training (ie: High Intensity Interval Training), which is great for cardiovascular health and boosting your metabolism. 

While you're choosing to perform HIIT with running, it's not really running in the general sense that I've described in this post. For example, you could perform HIIT with biking, or jump rope, or swimming; anything to increase your heart rate for the duration of some intervals. The sport of running is more about completing longer distances for a sustained time.

As long as you feel healthy and nothing hurts, I don't see anything wrong with doing HIIT as frequently as every other day for your general health. I like your approach of gradually increasing the intensity and shrinking the rest periods. Seems good!

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A Comprehensive Guide to Running
Declan Molony1mo30

My cross country coach in high school taught me the technique for side stitches. Sucks to do in the moment, but it works every time.

100% agreed on the mileage. The 10% Rule becomes more important once you cross that 10 miles/week threshold.

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Which things were you surprised to learn are not metaphors?
Declan Molony1mo20

I also have aphantasia. I found out that I had it at 22 years old when my friend recommended I read The Hobbit by JRR Tolkien. 

30 pages in, I told my friend, "This sucks! It feels like Tolkien is trying to paint a picture with his words and I cannot see it!" 

She replied, "Uhh, I think you might have aphantasia."

"A fan what?"

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