I offer my web design skills to improve the site design/code (for free). I can send you a redesign sample if you'd like.
Edit: it's done.
I don't care for the graphic - it doesn't really get the idea across very well, and its composition and quality is kind of grating. IMO, at the moment, having no graphic is preferable.
Agreed. Even with a decent grasp on the concept it's supposed to be showing, it took me a while to figure out what it was trying to show. The arrow from the brain to the brain in particular doesn't seem to click. (If you really want a graphical representation along that line, something with a bubble moving along the arrow and into the brain, and the brain expanding as the bubble dissolves, would probably work better.)
The concept you're trying to convey might become more obvious if you used thought bubbles instead of arrows. Have the humans imagine the artificial brain, and it appears; then have the artificial brain imagine a bigger version of itself, and it grows; and so forth. (This will involve more frames in a larger .gif, but I think it will make the process clearer.)
It doesn't make as much sense without the context of showing the parochial human picture first, and I'm worried that without that context it'll just come across as hyperbole. "The AI will be thiiiiiiiiiiis much smarter than Einstein!!!" It also suggests too strong a connection between recursive self-improvement and a specific level of intelligence.
Like. The big problem in explaining intelligence explosions is not explaining the process - in my experience, people grasp the process very intuitively from even my unclear explanations. The big problem is communicating the end result: recursive self-improvement takes AI off the far end of the human scale of intelligence. (The process might only be disputed as a way to reject the end result.) This image does a lot of that work right away.
Probably too silly to use here, but one thing that comes to mind is a brain reshaped to have the form of a nuclear mushroom.
The primer uses "light cone" several times towards the end; considering replacing with something less technical? Something like "our part of the universe" maybe.
Also the second-last paragraph of the primer has a typo:
For example, suppose the superintelligent maachine shares all our intrinsic goals but lacks our goal
What is the difference between the ideas of recursive self-improvement and intelligence explosion?
They sometimes get used interchangeably, but I'm not sure they actually refer to the same thing. It wouldn't hurt if you could clarify this somewhere, I guess.
Good on you for making this.
The site talks about 'the intelligence explosion' which doesn't seem quite right since it's a kind of process than a specific event. You might want to say 'an' intelligence explosion, though that would sound awkward.
From the site: "If there is a 'fast takeoff', the first self-improving AI will could prevent any competing machine superintelligences from arising."
'will could' sounds wrong; one of those two words needs to go.
I put together a 'landing page' for the intelligence explosion concept similar to Nick Bostrom's landing pages for anthropics, the simulation argument, and existential risk. The new website is IntelligenceExplosion.com. You can see I borrowed the CSS from Bostrom's anthropics page and then simplified it.
Just as with the Singularity FAQ, I'll be keeping this website up to date, so please send me corrections or bibliography additions at luke [at] singinst [dot] org.
